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danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-24 12:56 PM

There was a candy girl
Who made her way
Around the world

She's seen a lot of places,
Had her share of situations

She's been chewed up
By the greedy
A little more than savored
By the needy

She's been sucked in
Just to be spit out
Then given away
To quickly passed about

But, this is not the end
of my little tale
There will be a candy man
Who finds love in candy girl

What the others
Had failed to see
Inside her hardened shell
Is that the girl
Is really sweet

So the tale will end
My friends
When the little candy girl
Finds her little candy man
And live happily ever after
In their little candy land.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-24 01:28 AM

I hope she does Danni

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-11-25 01:39 AM

I hope this fairy tale has a "happily ever after" coming. Good poem, danni.

Michael

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

3 posted 1999-11-25 01:51 AM

Thank you both. I also hope for the "happily ever after" to finally come.

[This message has been edited by danni (edited 11-25-1999).]

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 1999-11-27 10:07 PM

Liked your Candy Girl! Hope the two really do live happily ever after! Forever and ever and ever.

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

5 posted 1999-11-28 11:54 AM

Well thanks J14. I'm glad you liked my candy girl.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

6 posted 1999-11-28 02:11 PM

All I can say is this gave me a BIG smile

Great work... well written and versed

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

7 posted 1999-11-28 02:16 PM

Thank you very much Thunder, always more than happy to be the cause of a smile

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 1999-11-28 02:18 PM

Candy is sweet and should be "totally" savored as you should and I'm sure will be.
Lovely poem!!!

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

9 posted 1999-11-28 02:21 PM

Lostboy- I hope you're right

Thank you.

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