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Dark Poetry #1

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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-11-14 08:51 PM

Adrift upon night's tideless sea,
...dark depths of melancholy,
Seeking out tempetuous ports,
...brazed vestibules of folly,
Unburied hopes of drifting dead,
...punctured lives of stinging sin,
Swell the howling chorus,
...over gulf of man's perdition.
Mephistopheles doth cloak the light,
...Cassandra, future's slave,
Forever sail primordial seas,
...silent tombs of Neptune's grave,
Solemn moans of pounding waves,
...rise forth the sobbing sea,
Echoes of a brooding gloom,
...rise forth the sobbing sea.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-15 06:52 AM

Oh I like!!!
Love the style!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-11-15 11:00 AM

Exceptional piece here, Mike, truly love this one. Welcome to the Dark Forum, I hope to see much more from you here.

michael

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

3 posted 1999-11-15 06:00 PM

Extraordinary work, Mike!
Every line a stopper.

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

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