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Tech_N9ne
New Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 4
Calgary Alberta Canada

0 posted 1999-11-13 04:24 PM

I hear voices in my head
They say the worst things when I'm in bed
These voices are driving me crazy
My view on life is becoming hazy
Come with me and we'll take a trip
It will be a long and dark journey on this trip
Say goodbye to the ones you love
At night it will be you your family dreams of
I really don't want to be this way
Please have a seat your in for a long stay
Don't try to run it will be no use
Look up there your in that noose

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-13 07:07 PM

You hear them too? LOL Great piece my friend...

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-14 11:43 AM

Sounds like an experience from another life that you are trying to resolve in this one.

Mine wasn't a noose but a shot to the neck of which I still suffer.

Nice work

-RS

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JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-14 12:20 PM

My view on life is becoming hazy...I think we all hear your Voices

Enjoyed the read!

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-11-14 08:21 PM

Well, this one was interesting.....

it had a darkness to it that I really liked.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-15 10:44 AM

This rocks, Tech_N9ne, I feel that noose right now.

Michael

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

6 posted 1999-11-15 06:30 PM

I'm impressed
So am I
Me too
Don't you guys ever shut up? I never get a word in.

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

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