Dark Poetry #1 |
The Machine |
Bonedaddy Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14Columbus NJ |
The machine turns on... the circular blade picks up speed... a glimmer catches my eye... so simple yet so destructive... i can't exscape its mystery... i reach forward to touch it... the tips of my fingers are now gone... the pain is emense... yet i still cannot look away... i am drawn into it... like some magnetic force... i reach forward once more... the essense of life flowing free... the same results... do i enjoy ther pain? do i hate myself that much? there is an answer... in the glimmer that catches my eye. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Don't forget your goggles. There IS an answer here. DB ------------------ Let's swim to the moon Let's climb through the tide Penetrate the evenin' That the city sleeps to hide. ===The Lizard King=== |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
[email protected]!!!!!!! truly though, I liked this one....I can relate a bit to the feeling, though I've never gone so far as to whack my fingers off....oh dear LOL, that sounded a bit, ehhh, sexually oriented.....I mean I've never sliced my fingers off.....LMAO....I'm too hyper right now, sorry all! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, I felt drawn into the blade as you spoke of it. Good work, B.D. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll go with Michael on this one, you drew me in!! Couldn't imagine that for real though. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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