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Releasing My Tears
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Releasing My Tears |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Today is a sad day I cry silent tears And ask myself questions about all my fears The day matches my feelings In every way From the gray sky incircling To the wet rain. It helps sighs and cries To sob out in pain I shouldn't feel this way But I do And it's so clear That sometimes I have to just... Release all my tears. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Release them Dear One, you are among many souls here that understand.  I found this so forlorn and sad. So glad you put your pain into such real words. Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
these words are dynamic. sometimes i feel the same way, even when i'm happy. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's good that you can release your tears though Joy. Good poem... Michael |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Feeling that way makes me happy, in a twisty sort of way, cuz it puts me in the zone. No place I'd rather be. Nicely put, JOY. DB ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sometimes all you can do is have a good cry! And you always feel better for it. And you know here in Passions, there are plenty who know and understand. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Let it flow Release brings on the calm and a new head to carry on. Loved this -RS |
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