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A little bit strange
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A little bit strange |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Is it really fair the whispered words quiet voices talk is it me they spite The words cut me deep am I is He did He who are they to tell merely puppets of the norm how dare they simple minds how dare they misunderstand I am not here for them I am above them Their words cut deep but I am a sea never will they Cut into down into me They talk endlessly Of me what i have may or could have done strike forth i say Can any knife find my heart Can any arrow find its mark Nay, I say they won't For i am only a little bit strange ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Good work...the last verse reminds me of feelings I am having ....For I am only a little bit strange. Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Merely puppets of the norm... Cool words. DB ------------------ Let's swim to the moon Let's climb through the tide Penetrate the evenin' That the city sleeps to hide. ===The Lizard King=== |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well said ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Yes, I too loved the line, puppets of the norm.... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Bonedaddy Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14Columbus NJ |
These feelings seem to be within everyone in the forum...really nicely put |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Your indifference to the thoughts and words of others and respect for your own choices and accomplishments is a tribute to who you are. A little bit strange is what makes us all come here. ( A pre-requisite I believe ) Wonderful words my friend. -RS |
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