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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
A mother strikes a willful child Admonishing the young girl's tears The mother's emotions run wild Feeding her daughter's worst fears Admonishing the young girl's tears The mother's scars have yet to heal Feeding her daughter's worst fears Smiles and innocence she does steal The mother's scars have yet to heal She was once a daughter, too Smiles and innocence she does steal Steel grey eyes turn a woeful blue She was once a daughter, too Punished by her mother's hard hand Steel grey eyes turn a woeful blue Doesn't she have to reprimand? Punished by her mother's hard hand Pride and esteem that hand does slay Doesn't she have to reprimand? She knows not of another way Pride and esteem that hand does slay The mother's emotions run wild She knows not of another way A mother strikes a willful child ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Nice Amy truthful and struck a chord for me but in a different manner as i am a son. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
DB thinking hard about my son. ------------------ "So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." ----The Great Gatsby---- ==F. Scott Fitzgerald== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Elegantly stated Dear Sweet Amy...as always you write with such clarity!!!  Always Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A timely reminder for me, if I do nothing else in this world right, I will raise my son, with all my love, all my soul and hints on life's lessons. Love not violence. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thanks everyone for the replies. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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