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MacBeth Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 14 |
"Write me a poem" you said "a poem to show your love" "choose a Shakespearian name" you said "that I might know it's you" "just be there" you said "just be my friend" "I love you" you said before you closed the door ___________________________ A message...... I'm STILL your friend if you'll let me be |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
A well worded plea. DB ------------------ Right out of the grave they came and made small talk. --"In Honor of Their Daughter"-- ==John Mosher== |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
May your plea be answered.Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
A plea that deserves to be answered!!  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes it's near impossible to let go of what has been "said" to us. Sometimes we're better off not letting go, also. Well done, MacBeth. Michael |
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MacBeth Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 14 |
Thankyou all, especially Michael for your kind words. |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
When love is "true" the door can never be really closed. I honor your pain. ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. |
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