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Dark Poetry #1

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MacBeth
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 14

0 posted 1999-11-06 04:39 PM

Would that I was King,
King of all my dreams.

Would that I had hope,
hope to ease the chill.

Would that I had answers,
answers to my prayers.

And would that fate were kind, not cruel,
to me: a simple, loving fool.

Shasta
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 24
st augustine florida

1 posted 1999-11-06 04:58 PM

I loved it
verry wored good

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Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

2 posted 1999-11-06 05:02 PM

Nice style Mac.
Enjoyed the brevity.

Mahalo,
DB

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Right out of the grave they came and made small talk.
--"In Honor of Their Daughter"--
==John Mosher==

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-06 05:12 PM

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-11-06 09:07 PM

This is great..short and powerful...Welcome.

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-08 04:48 PM

"Would", Indeed, MacBeth...."Would", Indeed.

Michael

MacBeth
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 14

6 posted 1999-11-08 06:09 PM

Thankyou all for taking the time to read and reply. Glad you liked it

my fingers are crossed for a brighter future.

DreadedOne
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 51
Odessa, TX

7 posted 1999-11-08 06:11 PM

I will cross my fingers for you too. Enjoyed the poem.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.

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