Dark Poetry #1 |
Justice? |
Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Scenes pastoral Crimes immoral Hearty repasts Poor man fasts Always dark Single bulb stark Dream on Scream on Many needs Grow like weeds Outstrip cash Conscience smash Caught so dead Now prison fed DB |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good read! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Hearty repasts...dream on scream on... LOL... I loved it. Mahalo, jld ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your style rocks. I can't read your work without my mind starting to churn in all different directions(could be good for my own writings)...Another great work here. Michael |
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