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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
The night is dark The walls seem stark Woman, shark She eats me up Arms are tired Brain is wired Her furnace fired It burns me up Legs are weary Eyes so teary I'm too leery I've been bent up My hands are tied My skull is fried So often I've tried They eat me up DB ------------------ " Goodbye Love " Goodbye Love--the shadows climb the wall --the door is closing --now on to something more And goodbye Love--a whisper down the hall --the wind is all --you still don't call Maybe I'll drink too much Try not to think too much And lie awake each night Until the dawn Goodbye Love--we hardly ever flew --but I'll remember --at least forever The time of love and you. ====The Manhattan Transfer==== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
First let me say,I know a certain man and woman who have a relationship like this. Second, you do this so well. Last, but never least;"I believe you are teaching me of the male side of loves torment." Me ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-05-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Life is too bland For one to understand The mind stretches and *Snap* broken rubberband. hehe...sorry, God...I need to write. My skull is fried too. Very good poem, Deep Blue, you may have well written it for me. michael |
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