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Shards of Glass |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
The sky is thirty shades of blue And the fallen leaves rustle a vibrant brown The clouds are high The sun is fire And I've hit zero With not a clue Doors are locked Windows barred Smash through to get some air No rain No snow Solid mental disturbance Pain hits hard Head explodes Into shards of glass So, so close...yet Void ------------------ Mirror, mirror, I confess I can't escape this, emptiness No more reason to pretend Here comes that same old feelin' again ----------------Snowblind ................STYX |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I think this one is My Favorite  Head explodes in shards of glass !! Exquisite imagery!! Jenny BTW...I have plenty of band-aids  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-03-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Void - one word says all. Powerful piece...liked it much. Michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
"Pain hits hard Head explodes Into shards of glass So, so close...yet Void" Powerful words...wonderful Post! The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Too close to home my friend, I got blown up once, glass and all, and yes the Void does arrive soon. Very good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sometime the void is a good place to rest and draw strength???  well written A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
D.B.Whyte~ reminds me of the migraine headaches I get!! Very good poem! -SEA |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very well written , very poweful! Good job!! Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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