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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-04-10 05:05 AM


Laughing at nothing much at all
Being BIG but wanting to be small

Talking like a child acting the fool
Wishing I was back in school

Running through fields, falling head over heals
Skinning your knee, remembering how it feels

Rollerblading down the road, acting like a fool
Dancing to music, thinking I was so cool

My chilhood memories I wish to open up
Catch that free spirit, run a muck

We all have it in us to be like a child
Free and easy, running wild

Why can't we let everyone see
The child that's inside you and me



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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Walter Poe
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1 posted 2000-04-10 06:59 AM


Perhaps our child is not inside but merely part of what is outside

a mask to look at in the mirror

to look into the past

who knows beautiful poem

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

Joel the wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-10 09:21 AM


This is like a piece I wrote, called “ when did we stop playing tag”
I teach on occasions small children, and I make sure I play tag with them.
Thank you for the memories
Joel.

Michael
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3 posted 2000-04-10 09:26 AM


You mean I'm not supposed to be running amuck still?  LOL  Na, I don't think I will ever stop being my inner child.  Good reminder to us all, though.  Thanks tracie.

Michael

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4 posted 2000-04-10 11:23 AM


Tracie~ Loved this! For me, it was rollerskating-not bladeing...makes me feel old! Not really, I'm headed to 30 this November and still feel 14 inside!! My kids think I'm silly. ((good!!))-SEA
baerlon
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5 posted 2000-04-10 08:05 PM


Hey i really like this, thank you for writing it in response to my challenge.  The child in us thrives only if we let it.  I say let it wings spread freely and glide ever so gently though the winds of life.

 There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Caitlin
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6 posted 2000-04-10 09:03 PM


Very nice piece. Sometimes it seems like we're forced to grow up too fast and it's times when we stop to dance to the music or run a muck that are the best. Thanks!  
tracie66
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7 posted 2000-04-11 09:41 AM


Walter~
Perhaps you are right, thanks so much for your reply  

Joel~
So glad I could bring back some memories for you and what a rewarding job teaching littlies    

Michael~
I hope you do run a muck still, it's great isn't and I hope I don't stop being that kid either  

Sea~
Well that's my inner child for you, it used to be rollerskates as a teen now I'm 33 and it's rollerblades for me  I'm glad someone else has kids who think they're silly, my daughter thinks i'm crazy.
By the way my birthday is in November as well, I'm a scorpio.

Baerlon~
Well said my friend I agree  

Caitlin~
Thanks for your wonderful reply, they are the best times aren't they  

Thanks to all
Tracie~



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


SEA
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8 posted 2000-04-11 11:01 PM


Tracie~ November 14th, and you? My son is the 9th, Scorpions are strong!( we rock )-SEA
tracie66
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9 posted 2000-04-12 07:20 AM


Dearest Sea~
Nov 6th, we most certainly do!!!
They say we are very intense, spiritual and creative creatures, among other things of course.
I hope so anyway.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


dhuron
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10 posted 2000-04-12 11:36 AM


Wonderful.  Brings back my childhood memories playing with my friends from across the street*although it isn't that far back to remember..about 12 yearsLOL*
  

Great Post!

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


tracie66
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11 posted 2000-04-13 06:17 AM


dh~
Glad I could bring back some memories for you
Tracie  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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