Dark Poetry #1 |
Hopeless |
sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Hopeless No matter how hard I try to find release without you, the only place there's comfort, is in your arms. Yet, you hurt me without realizing it, I fogive you without meaning it. I feel I need you in my heart to keep me whole. And so I stumble through this blurry vision of emptiness, trying to make sense of the torture, people have labled, "love". |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to passions!!! Wonderful First post, sheds a new light on love. Great, looking forward to more The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Skittles, all we can do is keep trying Good work A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SKiTtLeS~Welcome! this made my heart ache for you... love can be a very sweet torture too though! -SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is a good first post, a 5 howwwlller from me. And welcome. Become whole first. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Thanks dhuron, Isis, SEA, and Joel. Your replies of welcome are appreciated, and I look forward to spending more of my time here! ~sKiTtLeS~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Skittles welcome to dark passions!!! Nice poem !!! Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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