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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-04-12 07:10 PM


Hopeless


No matter how hard I try to find release
without you,
the only place there's comfort,
is in your arms.

Yet, you hurt me without realizing it,
I fogive you without meaning it.
I feel I need you in my heart to keep me
whole.

And so I stumble through this blurry vision of
emptiness,
trying to make sense of the torture,
people have labled,
"love".



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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-12 07:14 PM


Welcome to passions!!!

Wonderful First post, sheds a new light on love.  Great, looking forward to more

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-04-12 07:14 PM


Welcome Skittles, all we can do is keep trying  Good work  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-04-12 07:45 PM


SKiTtLeS~Welcome! this made my heart ache for you... love can be a very sweet torture too though! -SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-12 09:17 PM


This is a good first post, a 5 howwwlller from me. And welcome.
Become whole first.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
5 posted 2000-04-12 10:50 PM


Thanks dhuron, Isis, SEA, and Joel.
Your replies of welcome are appreciated, and I look forward to spending more of my time here!

~sKiTtLeS~

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
6 posted 2000-04-13 08:43 AM


Skittles welcome to dark passions!!! Nice poem !!!

 Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~


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