Dark Poetry #1 |
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Good morning, m'Lord |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
"Good morning, m'Lord" Frightened smirk on listless lip a chance bequeathed in all solemness a dark begining to a sheltered end where time, and promises begin again and only for this moment..truth set aside when hazard, and safty quitly collide a moross endeaver to quick the shock of a featurless omen in grim paradox as shadow and light merge in the flame... creating the empty expanding the grave.. touching upon souless atrophy "my heart and my will are upon my sleeve embarking as a novice in the true way. Adept in screwing my chance away.. Knowing the loss and mindful disarray.." and this is my begining... of each..and every...day... Edward A. Beerman 11-2-99 |
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russelle Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 21Chicago, Il. USA |
creating the empty expanding the grave i liked these lines Russelle |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awesome, Dark and Sinister. I loved it. Michael |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much!! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Adept in screwing my chance away... You too, huh? D.B. ------------------ When I'm sad she comes to me With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free. --------Hendrix |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I enjoyed this very much...well struck! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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