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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-02 11:31 PM


"Good morning, m'Lord"

Frightened smirk on listless lip
a chance bequeathed in all solemness
a dark begining to a sheltered end
where time, and promises begin again
and only for this moment..truth set aside
when hazard, and safty quitly collide
a moross endeaver to quick the shock
of a featurless omen in grim paradox
as shadow and light merge in the flame...
creating the empty
expanding the grave..
touching upon souless atrophy
"my heart and my will are upon my sleeve
embarking as a novice in the true way.
Adept in screwing my chance away..
Knowing the loss and mindful disarray.."
and this is my begining...
of each..and every...day...


Edward A. Beerman

11-2-99

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
russelle
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 21
Chicago, Il. USA
1 posted 1999-11-03 01:34 AM


creating the empty
expanding the grave
i liked these lines

Russelle

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-03 03:11 AM


Awesome, Dark and Sinister.
I loved it.


Michael

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-04 10:06 AM


Liked this much!! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-04 10:24 AM


Adept in screwing my chance away...

You too, huh?

D.B.

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-04 10:46 AM


I enjoyed this very much...well struck!


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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