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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
She strays from answers. She avoids revealing all. She will reveal all though. And when she does will she be forgiven? And when she does will we be forgivem? And when she does will all be forgiven? I think the one i wrote this about knows who she is and what i speak of. Ill always be there for you even if mommy says no. ------------------ life is short kill quick [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-31-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Hey Sweety, I hope whom you intended this for gets the message... I like very much how you repeated the same sentence  BTW..am going to post a wild little story for Halloween..it is alot different from my norm...I hope you will enjoy it! Jenny Lee |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Tom, I can't say I understand this poem, nor who it is intended for...... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Avoidance is more than just a technique, it's a way of life for more than a few. ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
For those who lie the lie often becomes the truth.Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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