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think only of me |
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starchild Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 59manchester, england |
it's through believing me, a touch will kill, the spine bends gently. inside me something breaks, the blood it takes is no use to me. midnight hour alone, with radio release me. a lying river flows, beneath my bones my mind has plenty. so glad you had your way it's not my way conceal me and now, i don't know how i have to find a clean life |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
A lying river flows beneath my bones....well done! Jenny |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"So glad you had your way, its not my way, conceal me" I love this line! It speaks great emotions! I look forward to reading more of your stuff  ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Conceal us all....please!?! I like the feel of this one. ------------------ He soils the sanctity of all that is perfect and wonders why he is shunned by all. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
I enjoyed reading this alot......very nicely done. with only but a few words you have told us of enormous emotions. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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