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Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-10-29 06:46 PM

My love has come to die
glaring at me, hatred in those eyes.
Screaming at me of trust not in my heart
you are the one who shredded our lives apart.
You believe you did nothing wrong
your lies, to you,are like a golden song.
You swear to me, you could never hurt
but on yourr words I taste filth and dirt.
You told me you would never do it, once more
knowing now how easily the lies out of you pour.
I gave you everything and everything you would take
only to make me watch you, and everything you would break.

So I say this only once more
the pain, the hurt, my heart is so sore.

My love I know now dies
Never again will I look into those eyes.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

1 posted 1999-10-29 06:57 PM

Filth and dirt, true words my friend. Truer than I love you. Onward!!! I'm with you even if I'm alone.

D.B.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-29 07:00 PM

Blistering raw emotions...very well done, Deverone.

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Michael Anderson

And after-drunkeness of soul
Succeeds the glory of the bowl -
An idle longing night and day
To dream my very life away

EAP

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-29 08:03 PM

Never again will I look into those eyes...my heart is breaking..excellent work; DEVERONE

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-10-30 04:12 PM

Eyes can be beguiling indeed...looking into a persons eyes, is a dangerous thing to do, in my opinion.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

5 posted 1999-10-30 09:06 PM

D.B., Michael...thanks for the replies......this has been sitting in me since the day I found out about she wanted to leave.....then found out what she did to give her a way out. Took me a long time to put the pen to paper to get this one out.

Jen ......don't worry my heart is already beginingto mend on my own and with the help of another sweet lady.

System......tue indeed looking into someones eyes can be dangerous.....but had I not done that I would not have been able to pierce her soul with that stare which in turn made her fess up.......for the eyes are truly the window to one's soul.

Thanks again everyone.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

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