Dark Poetry #1 |
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Rebirth |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Take me up in your arms. Take me away with your wings so white. Lead me to heavens gates so pure. Take me to him so I can be reborne. Take me . Please give me a new life. Why do I ask you? Why do I ask for your help? Is it desperation? Or is it faith? I consider it desperation. For I have never needed you before. Now I only need you for a second. Will you listen? Will you hear? Will you care for this sinner. Will you care for this evil before you? Can you cure the hate? Can you cure the loneliness? Do you even exist? Yes you do. But because i have faith in you not, you deny me. Even so there are many more gods. One shall deem me worthy of guidance. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I really like! Your work is getting better and better!! Jenny |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this one.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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