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bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-06-10 07:45 AM

This game you play
can only bring dismay
and break the branches
of friendship we have grown.
The twists and the turns
in our tree of friendship
will be cut away
leaving only an empty trunk
to rot in the ground.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-11 10:18 PM

~Oh how terribly sad this is. To see or hear of a friendship ending. You have written well, the metaphor fits perfectly. It's sad yet there is beauty in your words.
Thank you for sharing this little piece of you. Take care. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-11-2000).]

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-06-12 06:37 PM

what is it about a dead tree that just rips your soul out?? what an awesome piece here. i hope you will have a new seed in your heart one day, and it will grow forever to stay.

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

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