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Dark Poetry #1

To Be With You

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 09:29 PM

Do you love me,
or do you not,
I told you once,
but you forgot.

If I should die,
before I wake,
I will wait for you,
at the gate.

If you aren't there,
by Judgement Day,
I'll know you've gone,
the other way.

I will give,
the angels back their wings,
golden harps,
and other things.

And just to prove,
that my love is true,
I'd go to Hell,
to be with you.

MagnoliaBlue
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

1 posted 2000-06-07 12:36 PM

Wow...I can remember reading this in the 50's.
A blast from the past!

MagnoliaBlue

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

2 posted 2000-06-07 01:50 AM

In the 50's? haha... cool. It's about an ex boyfriend... I really cared about him. By the way... thanks for all the replies to my poems guys.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-06-07 03:24 AM

This one is really sweet, I find. I hope he deserved such a lovely poem!

Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-12 02:53 AM

I have said much the same for my love to kid. I do hope he is worth it.
I said I'd hold open the gates for her to pass.

love it kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-06-12 09:56 AM

lovely poem, i love it
right now i feel the same way for my ex

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