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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 09:29 PM


Do you love me,
or do you not,
I told you once,
but you forgot.

If I should die,
before I wake,
I will wait for you,
at the gate.

If you aren't there,
by Judgement Day,
I'll know you've gone,
the other way.

I will give,
the angels back their wings,
golden harps,
and other things.

And just to prove,
that my love is true,
I'd go to Hell,
to be with you.


© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
MagnoliaBlue
Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-06-07 12:36 PM


Wow...I can remember reading this in the 50's.
A blast from the past!

MagnoliaBlue

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC
2 posted 2000-06-07 01:50 AM


In the 50's? haha... cool. It's about an ex boyfriend... I really cared about him. By the way... thanks for all the replies to my poems guys.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-06-07 03:24 AM


This one is really sweet, I find. I hope he deserved such a lovely poem!

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-12 02:53 AM


I have said much the same for my love to kid. I do hope he is worth it.
I said I'd hold open the gates for her to pass.

love it kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
5 posted 2000-06-12 09:56 AM


lovely poem, i love it
right now i feel the same way for my ex

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