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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
blue transparent yellow dancing like a concubine lovely... midriff bared swirling heat drifting around and around her, a scarf of fragrance enhancing her grace. gold chimes crackling... oh, let her catch! [This message has been edited by Portia (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
hehehe hopefully before the night is over she'll have a pocketful of coins!  ~Heather |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
A splendid double entendre. I don't have much to say, other than I loved it and I believe I *know* exactly what the speaker means. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Well, I just have to say this: it's not about coins. This woman dances for coins no more than a candle flame would. Thank you gothicmoth. All I wanted was to portray beauty for beauty's sake. I hope that came across. [This message has been edited by Portia (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I love to watch flames dance in a fire, it is a pity we now have an electrical fire, still there is something beautiful and deadly about fire. a wonderful poem. Hot. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I too find beauty in this. You have depicted it with much poetic talent. Thank you for sharing. Take care. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Ah the dance of coins. the dance of the heart, the dance of the soul. In all it's beauty. love the feel kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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