I wanna hear Justin Timberlake Cuss

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I wanna hear Justin Timberlake Cuss

Ember
Junior Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-06-08 07:23 PM

And if i die before i wake
Know that all of this felt so fake
The way i lived
The lack of love
Watch it all wither away, ive had all i can take

Bleed me sour
Beat me sensless
i will never conform, i just devour
Ignorance sided with freedom is priceless
The wiser i grow, i loose my power

The power to cope and communicate
Patience for patience to come
The ability to relate
An endless well running dry, i go numb
My own pleasure i begin to negate

Standing next to forever
Crying tears that strike earth all to late

[This message has been edited by Ember (edited 06-08-2000).]

Novacaine For The Soul
Member

since 2000-05-26

Posts 122
New Orleans

1 posted 2000-06-09 04:41 AM

dear ember:
i must admit, i was quite impressed by this poem

also quite glad to see someone use the cliche "if i die before i wake" in a new and innovative way... i also have to give you credit for an interesting and quite unique title... i'm afraid it's a bit late tonight, but i shall be sure to keep an eye out for your other posts on my next visit to the forums...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-06-09 10:37 AM

your poem is beautiful...i love it
i'd like you to explain the 2nd stanza to me though...i'm having a hard time understanding it

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