»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #1
»
A Slow Death
| Dark Poetry #1 |
|
A Slow Death |
|
|
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
|
My world, so small. My reach, so vast. Went online to get over the past. Hoping for glimmers of love, Maybe even some truth now and then. I share my craft, My tool, the pen. Thought happier words would weave Their way inside. New friends, New places. Soon it will come to be. Uh, I am still waiting....... Watching the light die in me. *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a good poem. it states alot of feelings in few words which holds alot a meaning. and it found a way to speak to me and my heart. and i hope you one day find what your looking for |
||
|
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Good poem kynder, alot is said with few words. We all hope for something better... |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think you've come to the right place to make friends..a friendlier bunch of people I've never seen..they're like friendly puppies..but they don't lick your face!  |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too think you have come to the right place to find friends with similar ways to your own. I haven't been here a year yet and have already found a kindred spirit, a little brother, a sister and online father  Seriously!!! Respond to other's work offer an email, send a card, a poem to other members's soon enough you'll make friends. Sometimes you have to take the first step..... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
||
|
Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Short, sweet, and full of emotion. Ya gotta love it  By Necro Draconis Let nature guide your soul. |
||
|
lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Lovely poem, but don't despair, it's much easier to make friends online than it is in reality, and I'm sure you'll find plenty. I, for example, love all your poems I've read! Also, as I have mentioned elsewhere, I met my husband on alt.vampyres, of all unlikely places ... Uta Lotharingia "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Raoul Hausmann |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is a double edged sword, offering your emotions, sometimes it wounds but the rewards are just as real, just as true, and the connection just as meaningful. Loved it Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
