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Acies
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0 posted 2000-06-09 11:05 AM



Why is it so hard to believe how much I care for you
Have given you my all, now I don't know what else to do
All I ask is for you to try to understand how I really feel
And maybe you'll eventually find out that all is for real

I thought I finally found someone who would also care for me
You're finally proving me wrong, how could this be
Everyday, I hide and dry my tears, still the hurt just won't go away
I guess the wounds and scars of falling for you are here to stay

Please open your eyes, your heart, your soul to me
For I can only be with you and nobody else, this can't you see
Don't know why you can't seem to understand why I care
I'll always be here, only for you and nobody else to share

You said over and over that I coould never make you happy
This tears me inside cause that's all I want you to be
Been telling myself, "Maybe we should just let each other go."
"Is this for the better?" please tell me it isn't so

The sweetness in your heart you've showed me, I truly miss
Figuring out what wrong I did, maybe I do deserve this
Always have blamed myself for everything, I'm all torn apart
I know I should've treated you much better right from the start

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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1 posted 2000-06-09 11:09 AM


Well Acire if you've kept your feelings all along inside and thats burning you..I guess but still if it was mutual right from the start I feel there would have been some silent communication and I'm sure ya can make a fresh start and still have the same old good feelings..

Sincerely
A_L

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