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Acies
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0 posted 2000-06-08 01:17 PM



She made my day with just the sound of her voice
I gave her my smile.....
She's the reason for the best times of my life
I gave her my happiness.....
She said everything about her was real
I gave her my trust.....
She showed me how to appreciate who she is
I gave her my heart.....
She taught me what it means to truly care for someone
I gave her my love.....
She made me realize the value of life
I gave her my soul.....

So, why is it that I hurt?
So, why is it that I cry?
Why is it that blood flows down from my eyes?

Cause now that I have nothing else to share,
Now that I have nothing else to give
She took everything I entrusted to her
And decided to tell me...
That all about us was all a lie

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-08 05:32 PM


its not a good feeling when evrything turns out to be lie.. a relationship built on some hypothetical never existent personalities ..blind to the truths. I understand this too well..every thing is just a dream.... a mockery of every feeling that was there...but why at all there was love...it is all a lie...all just bull s*****
Sincerely
A_L


bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
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Gladys,
2 posted 2000-06-08 06:29 PM


good poem Im sorry you have been so hurt
keep your head up.

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
3 posted 2000-06-08 06:38 PM


you help me remember that men feel pain, too.  lies and false pretenses hurt everyone, not just us women.  thank you for this one!! i wish you the best.. in love and all aspects of life.  


kynder

Acies
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4 posted 2000-06-08 11:41 PM


Kynder, u r so nice
and yes, men have deep emotions and feelings too
i'm glad u like it

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