Dark Poetry #1 |
about a lie |
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
She made my day with just the sound of her voice I gave her my smile..... She's the reason for the best times of my life I gave her my happiness..... She said everything about her was real I gave her my trust..... She showed me how to appreciate who she is I gave her my heart..... She taught me what it means to truly care for someone I gave her my love..... She made me realize the value of life I gave her my soul..... So, why is it that I hurt? So, why is it that I cry? Why is it that blood flows down from my eyes? Cause now that I have nothing else to share, Now that I have nothing else to give She took everything I entrusted to her And decided to tell me... That all about us was all a lie |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
its not a good feeling when evrything turns out to be lie.. a relationship built on some hypothetical never existent personalities ..blind to the truths. I understand this too well..every thing is just a dream.... a mockery of every feeling that was there...but why at all there was love...it is all a lie...all just bull s***** Sincerely A_L |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
good poem Im sorry you have been so hurt keep your head up. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you help me remember that men feel pain, too. lies and false pretenses hurt everyone, not just us women. thank you for this one!! i wish you the best.. in love and all aspects of life. kynder |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kynder, u r so nice and yes, men have deep emotions and feelings too i'm glad u like it |
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