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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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Trying to make sense of it all. I only seem to fall. Sadness surrounding. Nothing for grounding. My life a constant sigh. Why do I want to die? [This message has been edited by allan (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my,...this is so strong, a little power packed poem you've got here. You ok though? Great expression. Take care. *Peace. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks for your concern (and nice words) SpitFire. I'm okay really - just one of those days!  I was rather taken over by melancholy yesterday! I posted another but brighter poem around a similar subject in Critical Analysis at the same time called 'Petals in the Flame'. I promise it's cheerier than this! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Allan, glad to see you only felt that way and don't really want it... we all have those days and luckily the sense to only 'feel' that way.. Good piece I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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