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Acies
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0 posted 2000-06-07 05:39 PM



How I wonder why it had to be this way
Forever in my life, I wanted you to stay
Everyday I wake up, tears in my eyes, still loving you
Hoping and praying that you'd feel the same way for me too

I dream of the things, with you, I could have done
Being together, forever with you, just having fun
You're the first one I ever loved, that I could honestly say
Didn't know what to do then for I really haven't felt that way

I'm still thinking of what I did wrong and why we fell apart
Though I lied to you and made you cry right from the start
I know I made a lot of mistakes that probably made you mad
Believe me, one thing I'd never intentionally do is make you sad

Now all I have is a broken heart filled with loneliness
My life is nothing without you, I'm all torn into pieces
Though it's hard having this feeling of uncertainty
I just can't move on cause it's gonna be really hard for me

Being a fool, waiting forever, that I know I should do
For the only thing that matters to me now is to be with you
Everyday I pray you'd come back in my life, though it's very unlikely
Please try to understand, loving you is all that means to me


[This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).]

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amazon_lover
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1 posted 2000-06-07 06:56 PM


Hi Acire
Mistakes happen but when there is strength to accept it and getting ready to rectify makes love even more wholesome. There will be times when relationship gets bitter those are the times when we should try to walk in other's shoes and realize their position. Its difficult but possible.

Sincerely
A_L

Acies
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2 posted 2000-06-07 11:54 PM


thanks Amazon_lover
that's exactly what i did
but i still don't understand

Portia
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3 posted 2000-06-08 12:16 PM


The hardest thing to accept is when a friend or love cannot forgive until they are truly ready to. Believe me, I have been there... I learned that it is always a good time to really think about letting that person go for *their* good, not mine. It's a hard lesson. Your poem captures it beautifully.
Acies
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4 posted 2000-06-08 11:38 PM


Portia
sometimes your feelings make you stubborn and blind to reality
i realize that i'm that right now
but it's just sooooo hard to let go

LeeAnne Dk
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5 posted 2000-06-08 11:43 PM


Ooh..this it one of the best works I've seen so far...I think I might have an idea of what you're going through. To fully understand it would be a tad hard unless I was in your shoes..I must say that love doesn't sucks..Its just difficult....Keep your chin up pal..
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