Dark Poetry #1 |
Love Sucks |
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
How I wonder why it had to be this way Forever in my life, I wanted you to stay Everyday I wake up, tears in my eyes, still loving you Hoping and praying that you'd feel the same way for me too I dream of the things, with you, I could have done Being together, forever with you, just having fun You're the first one I ever loved, that I could honestly say Didn't know what to do then for I really haven't felt that way I'm still thinking of what I did wrong and why we fell apart Though I lied to you and made you cry right from the start I know I made a lot of mistakes that probably made you mad Believe me, one thing I'd never intentionally do is make you sad Now all I have is a broken heart filled with loneliness My life is nothing without you, I'm all torn into pieces Though it's hard having this feeling of uncertainty I just can't move on cause it's gonna be really hard for me Being a fool, waiting forever, that I know I should do For the only thing that matters to me now is to be with you Everyday I pray you'd come back in my life, though it's very unlikely Please try to understand, loving you is all that means to me [This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).] |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Acire Mistakes happen but when there is strength to accept it and getting ready to rectify makes love even more wholesome. There will be times when relationship gets bitter those are the times when we should try to walk in other's shoes and realize their position. Its difficult but possible. Sincerely A_L |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
thanks Amazon_lover that's exactly what i did but i still don't understand |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
The hardest thing to accept is when a friend or love cannot forgive until they are truly ready to. Believe me, I have been there... I learned that it is always a good time to really think about letting that person go for *their* good, not mine. It's a hard lesson. Your poem captures it beautifully. |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Portia sometimes your feelings make you stubborn and blind to reality i realize that i'm that right now but it's just sooooo hard to let go |
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LeeAnne Dk Junior Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 32 |
Ooh..this it one of the best works I've seen so far...I think I might have an idea of what you're going through. To fully understand it would be a tad hard unless I was in your shoes..I must say that love doesn't sucks..Its just difficult....Keep your chin up pal.. |
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