Dark Poetry #1 |
I See You |
taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I see you, with your hat Pulled down Over your eyes So deep, so true. I see you, with your coat Wrapped round Your body So passionate, so true. I see you, with your lips Shut tight No words So sad, so true. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
To me this is about a person who's shut themself off from the world, you can't get through to them. Really nice. p.s. I like your website too! Uta Lotharingia "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Raoul Hausmann |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is excellent!!!!!!! and your first at that???? wow we are blessed to have you amongst our dark halls of passion now!! welcome!!!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tara, this is great! Welcome to the family, please check your email for a special welcome. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome indeed, liked this short works but speaks volumes.... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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