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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738


0 posted 2000-06-08 06:15 AM


I see you, with your hat
Pulled down
Over your eyes
So deep, so true.

I see you, with your coat
Wrapped round
Your body
So passionate, so true.

I see you, with your lips
Shut tight
No words
So sad, so true.


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lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-06-08 06:22 AM


To me this is about a person who's shut themself off from the world, you can't get through to them. Really nice.

p.s. I like your website too!

 Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-06-08 05:54 PM


this is excellent!!!!!!! and your first at that???? wow we are blessed to have you amongst our dark halls of passion now!!
welcome!!!!

kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-08 07:07 PM


Tara, this is great! Welcome to the family, please check your email for a special welcome.  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-06-08 09:29 PM


Welcome indeed, liked this short works but speaks volumes....  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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