Dark Poetry #1 |
Realized Too Late |
Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
As I think of you and close my eyes Someone please hold me tight Tell me that I'm just dreaming Because it hurts me deep inside I'd like you to feel how I miss you so much How I miss your warm, caring, and gentle touch Your cute little face in my mind Your soft and innocent lips touching mine I miss running my fingers thru your hair The feeling in my heart knowing you did care I miss the limited times we spent with each other How I wanted it to last and be with you forever That sharp but mysterious look in your eyes You look so cute when you bite your lower lip as you smile That devlish grin that shows as you stare right at me I miss you so much, alone in the dark, feeling so lonely You're the only one I've always wanted A fool, I am, I took you for granted Now here I am, holding on to the memories Left only with hope slowly drowning in my own tears Now I realize how much you really mean to me I miss you so much, that I want you to see Why only now, I don't know, I must have been blind My broken heart is in your hands, please be kind All I can say is, "I'm sorry, please forgive me" It may not be enough, but I don't know what else to do I"m not asking you for one last chance Baby, all I want you to know is that "I Love You" |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Acire Thats all I want. Thats all I feel. Thats all I dream. Just to be with her. THanks for the read. Sincerely A_L |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Acire!! I know how this feels!! You just want this one last chance to say how you feel... beautiful work I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeffyf Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 49Muncie, IN |
I really enjoyed this poem. These feelings seem to jump straight out of the screen and grab me by the throat. The pain and sorrow of missing or losing someone you love is prominant in many of our lives. There are people here that will help us, so we have nothing to worry about, nothing to hide. I would enjoy seeing more of your work here at dark passions. Jeffrey |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ya know, you men never cease to amaze me. i thought only women felt these things. i can see that you are truly blessed with a giving heart. i hope you don't have to endure much more pain, my fellow poet. very good work!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
thanks kynder you are so kind thanks to the others too [This message has been edited by acire (edited 06-08-2000).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, I really enjoyed this poem a great deal. What you describe is truly heartbreaking... a love that you hold still, but lost for yourself by some mistake. Well done. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Hope to see you around here more often! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
your first post!:phboy:..markedly different to your others...but ii found your first post!
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penpen New Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 3brazille |
o yeah. i've been there......Still there. Really good poem. I really enjoy reading it. Keep on writing! every step i take |
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