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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Other Side He watches himself from across the room. His body lies on the bed, bleeding it's last Strange awareness, seeing himself this way. Detached, yet interested. Is this how it is? His body, in twisted sheets, breathes a final gasp. He suddenly smiles, and walks into the mirror. 6/6/00 Gary Pence |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hhmmm,....very interesting poem. Chilling and creatively thought out. Thank you for sharing. Take care. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ahh Gary but what is in the mirror? Another reality, heaven, hell? Interesting stuff  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Barbie Junior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 39 |
Wow! What visual language! |
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Barbie Junior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 39 |
Wow! What visual language! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Jonas, I liked this poem lots. You have let us know with so few words, 1John 3:14;("We know we have passed from death unto life, because we love the brethren.")and StJohn 5:24; ("..;but is passed from death unto life.") Very encouraging words you have given us in this lovely poem, as the subject smiled.Good job and thank you for this one, my friend. Marcy "He suddenly smiles, and walks into the mirror." |
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