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kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-06-06 02:04 PM

Promise this,
Promise that.
I swear, baby!!
I got your back!!
Never have a woman I smacked!
Boy, you are one pretty lil' package!

...and so the lines go.
But little do they know,
I see all the gaping holes
In the story they already sold
To another not minutes before.

****kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-06 09:14 PM

~Great writing here. I have a few different images painted here that have me thinking. Well,...a poem that does this is definately a plus. Thanks for sharing. I'll let my mind tinker with these for a bit and then come back to read others replies to see if they are thinking what I am thinking.

. Anyway,..enjoyed the read. *Peace.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-07 03:20 AM

Yeah I agree. Gets you thinking this one.To me it's about how people misuse language to say the opposite of what they think. Or even that they just don't think at all, just babble. Like it!

Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-06-07 11:53 PM

Promises she needs are only yada yada yada noncommital affirmatives from him, then the violence begins, communication breakdown big time. A timely reminded for all, great work

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-06-08 04:24 PM

We'll here you go again with another great poem. it hold alot of truth and holds no lies it only states what people mostly guys have come to do just to get a girl. they seems to me at least to be fake because i'm just a dying romantic.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

5 posted 2000-06-08 04:51 PM

Hi Kynder
l see a lot in this and whats happening with lovers. to lie is terribly bad .

Sincerely
A_L

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