Dark Poetry #1 |
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The Dark |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Will you come with me Take my hand I will take you with me Close your eyes I will show you the way I will take you to the dark Into me into my words I will be your guide Allow the words That are my song to envelop you to wrap you in its images Heat fire Cold darkness The space in you deep down where you can't see i will illuminate The Dark is calling Take my Hand "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Into me into my words I will be your guide Allow the words That are my song to envelop you to wrap you in its images Heat fire Cold darkness The space in you deep down where you can't see i will illuminate -------------- Walter, this is exquisite...truly I love when you write like this... beautiful, gentle words of longing... adorned with the darkness and light of your poets heart. this goes on my fav list too ![]() you know me walter... i've never been afraid of the dark...*smile* later poet-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooohh,...this is good. Frighteningly real. (Not sure if that's a word, I seem to be making my own these days). Anyway,...great read here. Truly. Take care. *Peace. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Anonther fine piece of work Walter! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I had to read this several times to regain my typing skills....you shook me with this one, It is amazing, the words...the images...An amazing look into the "dark"....but allow me a moment to say...if you listen, perhaps there is someone calling to you in the light. Take care W.P. this was a magnificent piece. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
can you hear a voice calling whispered promises from the night an invitation to dance ... to dance with the shadows -- between the dark and light night breezes carry a song stars light up the midnight sky a blue celestial moon glows anticipation is on high no need for hesitation on this journey to embark for just a moment ... a moment to go dancing in the dark jm I owed you one *smile* later-darkness-gator |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
try again... |
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