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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
In the storm Stands the white rose temultuous waves of destruction abound her Yet tall is the white rose strong in the face Of the sensed doom around her And she does not bow down Pure is the white rose In the compost earth growing eternal strength in the nights that so hurt I see not the white rose She is so far away But i long to protect her But only the words can i say So i send her my words And my poets heart To help her when there is hope to see her through Be Strong little flower Your heart will guide true And as long as you want I will always talk to you Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walter~ this is incredibly sweet.You might want to put it over in open#6 if you haven't yet. I really liked this a lot!  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter...this is a beautiful, emotional dedication... "I see not the white rose She is so far away But i long to protect her But only the words can i say So i send her my words And my poets heart To help her when there is hope to see her through" your poets heart wrote a lovely expression. I love this one! very nice work...as always. take care, Janet Marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Your expressions here are so deep and true, what a great piece of work. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely. So often we don't think of the little important things, thanks for the reminder. Well written as always May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Thank you my friends i would like to add a dedication if i may TO MY FRIEND DANIELA WHO THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN FOR. Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and what a lucky person they are to have such a warm heart and words written for them.... Most wonderful indeed! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The white rose is a very strong symbol. A very touching poem, Walter. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice poem Walter. Your eyes can see the beauty of this white rose. James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Congratulations Walter... on this beautiful Rose of a poem, being published... It is deserving of a spotlight as are so many of yours. take care poet friend jm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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