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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 06:51 PM

She'll never get it through her head,
he beats her more she'll wind up dead.

Lookin for excuses for him everyday...
only things she's doin' is wasting away.

Screams coming from their house every night,
here come the cops for another fight.

Next day see him apologize...
and everything's alright.

See him knockin' at her bedroom door,
"Love ya baby can I have some more?"

Let him in hes ready to score,
beat her around and make her love you,
abuse her and feed her addiction.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-06 07:05 PM

Hi AngeliX
Thats bad and sick of a person. When you're in love you shouldn't hurt he object of your love and affection. If you beat a person you're not only physically mutilating her but also destroys the trust she had placed all along. He's foolish rampant person and never trust him.

Sincerely
A_L

MagnoliaBlue
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

2 posted 2000-06-07 12:23 PM

I am glad you didn't say that you love him...if you did, I missed it while I was trying to keep from saying some very bad things.

One message*** Love does not hurt!
Get out while you still can***

Hugs, MagnoliaBlue

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-06-07 03:38 AM

I love poems about things like this. The really incomprehensible things in life that just happen again and again. There's so much violence out there, so much abuse of the helpless, and of those too weak to help themselves, for whatever reason, be it love or fear, culture, or lack of self confidence. I really like the snappy flow in your poem and the way you avoid tear-jerking phrase. The simple facts say it all.

Uta Lotharingia
"Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn"
Raoul Hausmann

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-12 02:58 AM

how can this happen?? lock the door.
anyway I like the way you express yourfelf in this, I hope it's not you.
keep writing kid.

love your style.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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