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Dark Poetry #1

Thank Him

AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-06 05:20 PM

I am sitting in my room listening to the rain outside dropping from the sky, and I think of my life and how fast it is passing me by.
I think of the ones I have loved and lost and there are as many as those tiny rain drops. Which makes me think of you,I hope one day I don't lose you too.The rain makes me think of the many tears I have cried, when I cry it is mostly at night when no one is around and I think of my life,and the people who used to be in it. And just for a minute I think of the past and I can't help but let a tear pass.
When I think of the rain it also reminds me that tomorrow will be a brighter day,cause the rain will wash all the bad things away.
And the people that I have loved and lost have gone away for the same reason that they came.And the tears,just like the rain washed all the bad feelings away.And the next day when I wake up it will be a nicer day.I thank God for the rain,I thank God for my life,I thank him for the ones I cry for at night,I thank him for the stars, I thank him for the moon,but most of all I thank him for you.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-06 05:22 PM

Hi AnGeLiX1
Don't worry and you'll find that loved ones will always love you.
Sincerely
A_L

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2000-06-06 08:24 PM

That was a rather nice poem. I enjoyed the reflective parts of it. Some good writing and an interesting layout.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-06-06 08:44 PM

~Wow,...I loved this poem. I was feeling really sad at first reading it,..but you seem to have a good outlook. Very nice thoughts written in a wonderfully written piece. Take care *Peace.

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