Dark Poetry #1 |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
...it's a thing you can't describe have you been there? have more tea. the thing is, you reach a point where... a decision must be made. love is an act. it's not an EVENT that happens to you it's not a PARTY you are invited to it's a VERB you must take part in. and if you don't take part, then... cookie? well then, you lose your place. *chuckle* and let me tell you, dear, losing your place is not a good thing in this day and age oh take a mint, child. when you get to my age, you wear your purple hat you have your tea and cookies you learn to love your love and oh, if these walls could talk they would tell a tale of a passion, a desire, a darkness... *chuckle* but you don't want to hear about that. have another cookie, dear. and go after your darkness. It will do you good. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I love it kid. haha and welcome to Dark Passions, this is refreshing a different view, great. it's like I'm sitting down at an old aunt's house. haha, and she is telling me of the world, and life. I look forward to more. this gets a hhhhhhhhhoooooooowwwwwwwwllllllll... hahaha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a great monolgue. Really original and real. |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
This is very wity...sounds like the queen, eg. the purple hat. Loved it!! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Dark Passions Portia! This is most definately a wonderful start for you....I loved this! I hope to see more from you soon. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Welcome to Passions. I truly found this enchanting...reminded me of my grandmother sitting on the patio sipping tea and having on of her..."in depth" chats with me...how I miss them! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Such a neat, neat read. Welcome here. I'm a bit late on that but wanted to let you know that I look forward to more of your work. Take care. *Peace. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I am developing a strong affection for your aunt yanno... another wonderful work - glad I knew where to look for this... K |
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