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Portia
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157


0 posted 2000-06-05 12:29 PM


...it's a thing you can't describe
have you been there?

have more tea.

the thing is, you reach a point where...
a decision must be made.
love is an act.
it's not an EVENT that happens to you
it's not a PARTY you are invited to
it's a VERB you must take part in.
and if you don't take part, then...

cookie?

well then, you lose your place.
*chuckle*
and let me tell you, dear, losing your place
is not a good thing in this day and age

oh take a mint, child.

when you get to my age,
you wear your purple hat
you have your tea and cookies
you learn to love your
love

and oh, if these walls could talk
they would tell a tale
of a passion, a desire, a darkness...

*chuckle*

but you don't want to hear about that.

have another cookie, dear.

and go after your darkness.
It will do you good.

© Copyright 2000 Portia - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-06-05 12:36 PM


I love it kid. haha
and welcome to Dark Passions,
this is refreshing a different view, great.
it's like I'm sitting down at an old aunt's house. haha, and she is telling me of the world, and life. I look forward to more.

this gets a hhhhhhhhhoooooooowwwwwwwwllllllll... hahaha
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-06-05 04:01 AM


This is a great monolgue. Really original and real.
Jana Tovey
Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
3 posted 2000-06-05 07:03 AM


This is very wity...sounds like the queen, eg. the purple hat.  Loved it!!
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-06-05 10:04 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions Portia!
This is most definately a wonderful start for you....I loved this! I hope to see more from you soon.


 Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~



a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

5 posted 2000-06-05 10:13 AM


Welcome to Passions. I truly found this enchanting...reminded me of my grandmother sitting on the patio sipping tea and having on of her..."in depth" chats with me...how I miss them!

 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-06-06 09:59 PM


~Such a neat, neat read.  Welcome here.  I'm a bit late on that but wanted to let you know that I look forward to more of your work. Take care. *Peace.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

7 posted 2000-07-17 07:15 PM


I am developing a strong affection for your aunt yanno...

another wonderful work - glad I knew where to look for this...

K

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