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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-04-01 02:27 AM


You are a star,
that fell from the sky,
and into my little heart,
to ignite a fire,
you are a roof,
which I shelter beneath,
to feel secured,
You are my guardian angel, who watches over me from the blue sky,
you are my eyes,
that defines good from evil,
you are my soul,
that has cleanse my heart,
from all the sins I have done,
you are the woman I want to meet,
to spend the rest of my life with,
you are the one I pray for every night,
until we meet.




 Ronil (the one and lonely)

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
danni
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1 posted 2000-04-01 12:01 PM


very nice. may you meet one day soon.  
just_another_fe
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2 posted 2000-04-01 07:41 PM


here i am!!!!! here i am!!!!! lol i too wish 4 that same thing (except a guy of course)   good luck in finding her shes out there somewhere
~Angie


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AVANTI
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3 posted 2000-04-02 12:38 PM


that's a sweet one...
i'am sure you'll meet...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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4 posted 2000-07-24 01:17 AM


I hope I do meet her one day so I can give it to her.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Lady Lost
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5 posted 2000-07-25 09:39 AM


W O W....all I can say is that I am SO happy that there are single guys left in the world who are a passionate as you!!!! I was starting to lose hope....please please please don't settle for less than what you are looking for!  I put a poem up yesterday in the Corner Pub..."The Man who Lives in My Dreams"..you may find it interesting!    I really dig your poem! I am blonde..about 5'6,...hehe just kiddin.  (Sorry 'bout the lengthy response...)< !signature-->

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

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