Dark Poetry #1 |
Change of Heart |
J_Jeter2 New Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 2Longwood Fl, 32779 |
Isn't it quite sad, how quickly the heart breaks One persons change of heart is all it really takes In an unthought instant your life can change its song And you're left to wonder what exactly you did wrong Once my heart lived and now it has died What can you do when there are no tears left to cry When everything you have is lost and it changes who you are How can you fight, a pain so bad that it leaves a you with a terrible scar I used to know happiness it was apart of who I was and still want to be But it's hard to smile when the one you loved,no longer cares So my advice to all the people who know my sorrow If you think today is bad wait until tomorrow. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
AMEN!!!! powerful words here!! Jenny |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Heartfelt verse.Hoping tomorrow is better for you ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The great belief is undeniable reality What comes tomorrow is only a product of today Entropy is the key |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Hey..well you've always responded to my poems so now i'm responding to yours, and once again i love this poem, although i've already read it... ashley |
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