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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 1999-12-19 01:23 PM


WORDS

They're only words upon the screen,
But what power they hold.
Give sunken eyes a darling sheen,
Or turn the room ice cold.

Sometimes they're kind, glowing and warm,
Speak of the gifts we share.
A beacon of love in life's storm,
That guides me through with care.

Sometimes they come, a twisting knife,
That leaves the soul to bleed.
When you realize your whole life
Is subject to her need.

The vision branded on the brain,
Her with another man.
Every squeeze a shard of pain,
That leaves love overran.

Intoxicating thoughts for you,
Well, have a drink one me?
A toast, "To thine own self be true",
For all the world to see.

They are but words, this much I know,
More so than I want to.
Just tell me once, before you go,
Which ones, again, are true?


 Michael Anderson

It's the little things you take for granted,
That'll mean the most to you when they're gone.





© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

1 posted 1999-12-19 01:42 PM


Love and Relationships are truely among some of the toughest tests we face.

Wishing the best for you Michael. As always, you've racked up another winner!

-RS    

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-12-19 10:04 PM


Indeed they are but words. Words however have the power to shape minds and ideals. It should be acknowledged that a razor tongue cuts both ways, as does a seductive one.

I must agree with the feeling behind this piece if not the sentiment. Well done my friend.


 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
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3 posted 1999-12-19 11:43 PM


You spoke alot of truth here sir....They are merely words....I guess we really don't have much to go on except faith in eachother, huh?  Words can be pretty empty at times, I hope you don't feel your life is subject to my need....in fact, I hope much of this doesn't pertain to me and you.  There are some pretty bitter realities listed here.  Powerful poem indeed!

 - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-20 12:10 PM


Indeed, words can do so much, start wars, end lives, relationships etc.  This was wonderful Michael  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
5 posted 1999-12-20 02:07 AM


Michael...the last staza made me realize that just because someone says how they feel, doesnt mean that it's their true emotions or feelings...which is true...ive been there...and i never want to return
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