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An Unwanted Meeting |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
***I have to explain this one: I just saw my x in a parking lot and he lives 20 min. away so it was kinda weird to see him right there...so i decided to write a poem straight from my mind onto this tablet...if it suxs i'm sorry i just had to let out these emotions**** I saw your car I cringed in pain I tried to hide those feelings i had tamed But you saw me and all you could do was snicker because you have moved on and found love quicker Why was I there? I could have been in a million other places except fate landed me here to deal with your many faces < !signature--> "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I've been through this myself.... < !signature-->It can be agonizing and hurt-filled... You expressed this well  Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
JennyLee-- Thanks...although i wish that i didnt have to meet him  Thanks for understanding!!starboards "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Starboards-I to have felt this. It is such an agonizing feeling. You want so bad to be the first one to find new happiness hoping it will make the one who threw you away feel pain and regret. Did that make any sense? Anyway, this didn't suck at all. I always enjoy something I can connect to. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Danni-- Thanks for your comments, yes it did make sense. If someone hurts you your first instinct is to hurt them back, but with me this was not the case. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and i'm glad there's someone out there that cares. Thanks again!! starboards "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must echo the feelings that have been shared. . . it's a strange feeling to deal with. . . And I just knew that your instincts would be to not be the first to hurt back. . . Wonderful poem Starboards. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
There's some of us out there that do care star, you just read responses from a few, me included. Good work getting out your instant emotion through your poem. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks guys! You guys are the reason i continue to post!! Thanks for understanding!! Starboards ************************* "You will see a lot of things, But they will mean nothing to you If you lose sight of the thing you love." -from the movie "At First Site" ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's like a test sent to try you I know, hon, I know.. Once again I say exorcise the demons and what better place among friends here in the Dark Forum ((HUGS)) Ashley What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- My friend also told me that it was life's test and that i had failed...is this true...what was i supposed to act like?? starboards ************************* "You will see a lot of things, But they will mean nothing to you If you lose sight of the thing you love." -from the movie "At First Site" ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ashley hon, in my opinion there was only two things you could've done. Been indifferent as you were. OR gone up to him and said hello and how good your life is going at present. Revenge says the latter I know, but personally I think you did it right. Let it go you may still have another opportunity. Besides, it doesn't matter who has a new partner first, that is childish. You have bettered yourself already by coming here and writing poetry etc. I'll bet you a million he hasn't improved anything in any way. As you improve yourself and writing you are achieving something for yourself. Keeping busy learning new stuff you love, is good for you, interesting etc. So what do you think of all that, you asked for it, I hate giving advise in typed form feels like I'm lecturing  What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- No, actually i like it when people give me advice on how to act, etc. I couldnt really have talked to him because he was in another car...which was driving away...which i guess was a good thing...i didnt have to put up with him...and then today I saw his friend...i just want him to be out of my life and for life to stop making him in my life...can you understand?? i hope so. Any advice towards this would be appreciated (anyone...feel free to join in!) thanks, Ashley ************************* "You will see a lot of things, But they will mean nothing to you If you lose sight of the thing you love." -from the movie "At First Site" ************************* |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Starboards, From all the words of yours I've read. Star is a befitting name for you. You were bound to cross paths again at some point in time. You are the bigger person in this, because you didn't feel the need to hurt him. Something that will earn you a much greater reward. Be Good -RS < !signature--> There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix [This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Freebyrd-- When ever i read your comments i have to smile, you believe so much in me...thanks... Ashley (starboards) |
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