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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Lonliness surrounds Many voices, come and go They seek attention, from to and fro Glances given away, Only then to stray How we play, How we prey! ~~Lonliness~~ A deep crevice In ones heart Tearing apart ~Empty~ ~Lost~ ~Abandoned~ What a cost!! The one when I left you And you left me Lonely is what I feel, Sends me cold appeal And is only...... But for the rough, And the tough I guess?????? I want a touch to feel I need something real I can only reach out God....... Lonliness makes me shout! Scream out in pain But lonliness has it's way And it leaves me once again Feeling all is vain..... [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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mario22 Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23 |
Just wanted to say what a nice poem, I really liked it keep your head up gods smileing. always mario |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hell kid I take a short trip down to the bay area and you decide to post. haha I almost miss this,,, this is me. you have a wonderful grasp of lonliness within. I know this all to well. I will E you when I get back home. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I know this all too well. You've done an incredible job depicting this. Gosh,...I scream out as well....sometimes it helps. I can be in a crowded place and feel more alone than when I'm actually alone. *Sigh*...thanks for sharing this. *Peace. |
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