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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-27 10:48 PM


Lonliness surrounds

Many voices,
come and go
They seek attention,
from to and fro

Glances given away,
Only then to stray
How we play,
How we prey!

~~Lonliness~~
A deep crevice
In ones heart
Tearing apart

~Empty~

~Lost~

~Abandoned~

What a cost!!
The one when I left you
And you left me

Lonely is what I feel,
Sends me cold appeal
And is only......
But for the rough,
And the tough
I guess??????

I want a touch to feel
I need something real
I can only reach out

God.......

Lonliness makes me shout!
Scream out in pain

But lonliness has it's way
And it leaves me once again
Feeling all is vain.....


[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 05-28-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
mario22
Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 23

1 posted 2000-05-28 02:06 PM


Just wanted to say what a nice poem, I really liked it keep your head up gods smileing.
always mario

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-29 02:26 AM


Hell kid I take a short trip down to the bay area and you decide to post. haha
I almost miss this,,, this is me. you have a wonderful grasp of lonliness within. I know this all to well.
I will E you when I get back home.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-29 11:03 AM


~I know this all too well.  You've done an incredible job depicting this.  Gosh,...I scream out as well....sometimes it helps.  I can be in a crowded place and feel more alone than when I'm  actually alone.  *Sigh*...thanks for sharing this. *Peace.
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