Dark Poetry #1 |
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Devin Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29Oviedo,Fl, USA |
I can't tell you where I've been when I don't know myself. I'm just trying to make it in this world, without you. I needed you at first, but you're slowly fading from my grasp. I thought I loved you, but I guess it was some silly schoolgirl crush. I can't tell you who I am, when I don't know me. I'm just a lost little girl, hiding under the mask of The Goddess of Death. But I can't help asking, Do you love me? Do you care about me? Will you be there? Some will and some won't. That is the inevitable truth. Do not shed a tear for me. I am happy, so be happy also. Never lose hope, for even the darkest nights have ends. ~Cloud ^_^ |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Devin, Knowing what I know about before makes me courious as to if I know what your talk about. Plus I glad to you poet in here again. Would you talk to me sometime. The poem was quite good. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Devin Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29Oviedo,Fl, USA |
Arigatou for your kind words, Neala. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Devin, this is true, we must find ourselves before we can, or recieve. a great poem you have here kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I can't tell you who I am, when I don't know me. I'm just a lost little girl, hiding under the mask of The Goddess of Death. *Find yourself my friend...this is a great piece. It took courage to write and post..so thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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