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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
0 posted 2000-05-27 11:51 AM

An insignificant person standing
Wondering as to what is to become
Of themseleves
Yet knowing there path of life has
Yet to begin
Knowing there path
Was choosen for them
Not giving them a choose
In this world
Execpt to follow and servive
Or to give up and surrender
BUt as they stand insignicant
They realize that they are significant
If they servive

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)
© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-05-27 08:16 PM

Neala,
Good poem, though I don't really think that Fate controls everything. Hope to see more.
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