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mazzystar
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-05-26 04:40 PM


Wounds that aren't given enough time to heal
Bleed as bright as fresh ones when reopened by unforgotten pain.
A body,
A heart,
A mind,
A soul,
Can only endure so much until it has become slaughtered.

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-05-26 06:20 PM



Such pain and despair in your words.  Short and to the point.  The line "a body, a heart, a mind, a soul can only endure so much until it has become slaughtered"  really hit home for me.  I only hope that God will give you the peace that you so desire and that happiness will knock on your door soon!  Keep smiling my friend  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-26 06:47 PM


You obviously have a lot of pain you are trying to deal with... I'm sorry... but again please keep the posts down to two a day.  
I enjoy your writing though  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-05-27 05:21 PM


Expression is a balm.
Apply it as liberally as you want, it is more wonderful than the finest fragrance on a wound.

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com


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