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Dark Poetry #1

Without You

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-05-26 10:02 PM

A dark shadow settles upon my soul
I look down ar you, in my arms
Grasping your last breath of life we speak
For I have bestowed my evils on you
And now you are at your death
As the tides of time ebb and flow
But time is still for us
The tears come as I watch you leave me
Like the setting of the sun you go
Lingering until all the light has left
The candle that was once lit lies dormant
Gone with the passing of the night
And I have cast this upon your soul, I know
But now I must live without hope
Without you
Without love

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-05-27 12:26 PM

Neala, this is so sad hon. I hate death...
Sadly but feelingly portrayed, good work

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-05-27 03:53 AM

Ditto Isis,
A brilliant portrayal of sadness from you Neala.
...
Like the setting of the sun you go
Lingering until all the light has left
...

Regards, sudhir

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2000-05-27 08:58 PM

Thank you I am glad you liked my poem.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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