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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-20 12:12 PM



  I reach out,
no one is there.
  I cry out,
but your not there.
  I beg,
no one hears.
  You left,
I'm still here

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-05-20 12:55 PM


Short and to the point, but so much said in so few words...Nicely done...

 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-05-20 02:05 PM


this is heartbreaking.....it may be short and to the point, but it's a sonnet nonetheless......

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-05-20 07:20 PM


Fewer words are sometimes better.
Like this.
Great.


Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

marquese_iam
New Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 1
U.S.
4 posted 2000-05-21 12:09 PM


Very,very nice.....Indeed.

Marquese'a

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-05-21 09:42 PM


For a short piece, this spoke volumes.  It is so sad to want to reach out for a loved one and you find them not there for whatever reason.
Good work  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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