Dark Poetry #1 |
My personal Fear.. |
Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
I reach out, no one is there. I cry out, but your not there. I beg, no one hears. You left, I'm still here |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Short and to the point, but so much said in so few words...Nicely done... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is heartbreaking.....it may be short and to the point, but it's a sonnet nonetheless...... Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Fewer words are sometimes better. Like this. Great. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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marquese_iam New Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 1U.S. |
Very,very nice.....Indeed. Marquese'a |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
For a short piece, this spoke volumes. It is so sad to want to reach out for a loved one and you find them not there for whatever reason. Good work I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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