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My personal Fear..

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-20 12:12 PM

  I reach out,
no one is there.
  I cry out,
but your not there.
  I beg,
no one hears.
  You left,
I'm still here

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

1 posted 2000-05-20 12:55 PM

Short and to the point, but so much said in so few words...Nicely done...

There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-05-20 02:05 PM

this is heartbreaking.....it may be short and to the point, but it's a sonnet nonetheless......

Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-05-20 07:20 PM

Fewer words are sometimes better.
Like this.
Great.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

marquese_iam
New Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 1
U.S.

4 posted 2000-05-21 12:09 PM

Very,very nice.....Indeed.

Marquese'a

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-05-21 09:42 PM

For a short piece, this spoke volumes. It is so sad to want to reach out for a loved one and you find them not there for whatever reason.
Good work

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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