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My Immortal Beloved..............second in the vampire series
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My Immortal Beloved..............second in the vampire series |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
My Immortal Beloved Without you, I am despair Come to me from masked curtain In deathblow, we, the perfect pair Relieve my heart, and bestow your burden I offer myself, let it be your denote Take me; end my inner jousted affair Sink fangs of ecstasy to throat Let me be damned, hear my prayer I am your wilting flower On me, I beg you… feed Give me your gift, the power Implant the black magic, I am your seed Drain my very essence from vein And give me mortal death With transfusion, my life sustain Kiss me, and suck my last breath ……. My immortal beloved Marina May 2000 |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
dark and mysterious...i like these kinda poems! great job marina! keep it up...btw...where could i find the first vampire poem u've written? just wondering ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Elizabetta would be proud, wonderful work!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ashley, thank you. Back in Open 7 you will find the other and I am finished #3 it will be posted in 7 next week. Isis, thank you also. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superbly dark Marina. . . I love this series that you have begun and eagerly await the next to *ahem* sink my teeth into. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
OHH*shivers* I always love reading poems like this...I must say this was wonderful..No beyond wonderful..... Daniel |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hell kid when I bite they just bleed. and yes a great poem. I will also look forward to the next post. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven thank you, this series has been fun to write, but you don't have to wait till the the next one too sink your teeth into something........LOL. But never mind we will save that for adult!!!!! Daniel thank you very much. I will post the third to this series this week in Open 7. Wow Joel! you must make a great first date!!LOL Marina |
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