Dark Poetry #1 |
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I Knelt in the Rain |
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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
I Knelt in the Rain The realm of thought blackened and burnt, Ignited by your touch, Scarred by your breath, And torn my your endless tears. Mourning mists have parted at your presence, Friend to the theif. You left only scratches in the sky, As you stole away the stars. Young rabbit faced fools, Run round about, Blind and unscathed. Unaware Forever unforgotten, Etched as brilliant rain, Across your undaunted face. I hated you and this place, The night I knelt in the reign. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tawny,...this is the first of your works I have read and I have to tell you....I am impressed. Great post thanks for sharing. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you have a talent...keep writing.... Kathleen [email protected] |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is just a great poem!! Your descriptions are so very original and unique...and so clear. Absolutely amazing!! swamp faeryie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful piece this one, keep up the great work!! ![]() I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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