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Think Before you Judge
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Think Before you Judge |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Think Before You Judge As people look at me I wonder what they see A person of great despair Or one that doesn’t care For no one understands How I truly feel The constant questions and demands How is a man to deal I go through life wondering What is in store for me But then just sit pondering What is the world to be The world is full of hate That I really despise Is this just our fate Or can we compromise If we could live in peace What wonders that would be If we could live in peace What wonders I could see The world would act as one No more fighting or hate The violence would be done What is wrong with a united state If everyone respected each other For what they truly believe If everyone respected each other What an understanding we’d conceive The hunger would be no more The homeless would be sheltered The world like never before The world forever altered For if this is why I’m different So twisted and messed up Perhaps I’m really brilliant And the world should just wake up By Necro Draconis |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dear Necro, I totally agree with you, and what a way to express it as well. Well written. Hopefully the world will wake up. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and if your world could truly be I would paint the sky velvet purple and the earth soft orange and violet ...and ohhh, what a wonderful world it would be! I enjoyed this to the hilt... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes the world together, what a sight that would make. A great poem, and a great thought. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Great poem,so many good questions asked...mankind awaits the answers. This poem reminded me of Revalation 21:3-4 my favorite.....*sigh* guess we must be patient for the answers to come =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome! What a wonderful first post!! Wise words, and yep I bet you are brillant along with the rest of us, and it is the world that trails behind, emotionally and spiritually. Let's all hope it wakes up soon, before it's ruined forever!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Necro, You have expressed a beautiful heart with this poem. I especially liked the line, "What is wrong with a united state", based on all the things you mentioned in your poem. Very lovely and touching, Marcy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Necro~ What a thought-provoking first piece. Welcome to Passion's. There will come the day that we will return to the peace that has been promised. We are ONE .... think of the possibilities ! Oh, what a day it will be ! To harness the heart of all mankind into one vessel of hope .... the wonder of it all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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